the eyes of the loved one
I looked into his eyes of brown and thought that I would surely drown
for in his eyes I knew I’d find
the heart that he had stole of mine
and on my heart did take this trail
for when I would look ,so pale
I'd say this guy he is to blame
for of my life his heart I claim
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Um, ur love doesn't steal ur soul (unless he's the devil). he steals ur heart...
doesn't totally make sense...
It's pretty good but there's no rhyme pattern (r there rhyme patterns in poems?) and the bath and sould doesn't really make sense, like rokky said. I luv the first 2 lines!
what's up with the last line??
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